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Friday, August 16, 2019

winter sport

Hi my name is Taine and I go to St Francis of Assisi school in Christchurch.

This season we were playing rugby are first game was the riper tournament it was time  to start of the  first game we played Ola and we won buy a bit of trys. And then we played New Brighton and then we went back to our school. And then the next Thursday we came back and we did the tackling tournament and then we vs Ola and then paparoa Street they are both a very hard teams. And then we came back to school and then the next Thursday we played a really game but we play two it was a real first game and then we now are season was not going to be easy. And then then the season went on and then there was are last game of the season we played Ola and then we won 6 to 4 and we came 3 and we were so happy 


hope you Enjoy my winter sport blog come again?😎

3 comments:

  1. Hi Taine,
    I really liked how you talked about your season and some of the tries that you and your team scored and it was great that you came 3rd in your division. for your title you should put a capital letter at the start and at the end of your first paragraph you should put a full stop.
    - Jimi

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    1. thank you Jimi for the nice comment i hope you did got in your divson thank you for the relp
      -Taine

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  2. Hi Taine,
    I really liked how you descibed how your season went and that you got 3rd
    good job.
    -Zac

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